1:1 tutorials about format pages and illustrations.
Giles told me my pages are clear and most of pages have white sides so do not block it with lines. (I have changed some).
I removed some collages and will make another collage page.
Giles told me right big one is good but left ones are too small so split it in two pages.
changed it. I think it is visually better
I thought I should draw all things but Giles told me I can photograph my textile samples and use it on my illustration. It will be clear. I already started some illustrations but I will try photograph to make it visually better.
I got a feedback about formatting from term2 that I can choose good images to show but I need to reduce the number of images. To be honest formatting is difficult to me and take a lot of time. However one of my aim this term is to get a positive feedback about formatting. I will try !